Farewell

Mohammed and Max's Draft Writing

“Oh no it is Saturday Morning, guests are coming over”. I sprung out of bed and headed straight to the kitchen.

“Ok, I’m gonna make pancakes, have I bought the maple syrup”. HMMM?

I searched in the cupboard, lucky I had half of last times left over. “It is really hot” I flung the big window’s open wide, BANG!

“Open the door we are here”replied the guests. “Ok” I said. “How was your day” I said. “It was a great day” the guests answered . “Come on in”

BREAKFAST IS READY! . “Yeh  I can smell that yummy pancake”replied the guests. As we entered the kitchen, My eyes were about to pop out.  

To Be Continued.......... 

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"ALL I WANT IS TO WIN THE RACE"

On a summer day, the beautiful leaves swayed in the lazy breeze. Ella was living with her dad in the old farmhouse. Out in the paddock there were two horses. When they had breakfast, they were looking at Mist out of the window. Mist was eating leaves and was happy. Mist was happy that she lived with a family that is looked after.

The next morning Ella got up and got changed and went outside to train Mist for the horse race. The Horse race was going to start Next Week on Tuesday 20th November 2012. So Ella had to train Mist for one week. When Ella’s dad had breakfast, he said to himself how is Ella going to train Mist for a week? Two days later, Mist has been trained but there is one thing. how can Mist go faster.  So Ella hopped on the Mist and then they start to ride inside the fence. It was the last day until the tournament starts. It is the horse race to win the 2012 Horse Cup. Ella couldn’t wait until the tournament start.

Today was the tournament and Ella and her dad got up early in the morning got change. They went outside and got Mist and put her in the truck and left and got to the Horse Stadium. This stadium is where the Horse will be racing. When Ella and her dad got to the stadium, it was the big as Eden park. When they got there Ella got out Mist out of the truck and went to the waiting line for the race to start. When the callout said everyone has a number to 1-8 will be racing in the next two minutes. The race will start in forty seconds and please place your horses on your lane for the final race. The game was going to start and said READY, SET, GO all of the horses ran as fast as they can and it looked like Misty in first place followed by Mist and Mackenzie. Mist is catching up to Misty and then suddenly Misty tripped and Mist stepped on Misty and twisted it’s leg  followed by other horse and the race had been stopped. When they took out Misty and Mist out of the race, they had the bad injury. Then doctors said these injuries are very bad. It end up no one had won the 2012 Horse Cup and said it will happen again next year on Wednesday 20th November 2013. Two years Later, Misty and Mist lived happily ever after with Ella.

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Swimming

When we got changed ready to go swimming, it was incredible. As we went on the stairs and got into the pool it was cool and warm water. Some of the girls were screaming because they thought the water was cold but it was warm.  When eight people got inside the pool Mr Harris was standing next to the stairs. He said to come, to the side of the pool. When we got to the side of the pool we had a race. Mr Harris had to throw the board into the water and two people have to chase it and come back. To try and get the board is to go down, push your legs and then kick them. When it was my turn to go and chase the board, I was versing against Dante. When Mr Harris threw the board in the pool, I came down push my legs and went off to get the board. I got it first and then gave the board to Dante and versed back.

Manaiakalani Flim Festival

My thoughts about the Manaiakalani Film Festival was exciting. We went inside the bus to go to Sylvia Park. When we got to Sylvia Park we walked inside the buildings, went upstairs and then we reached got to the Movie. When we got there we went inside the x-treme screen. When we got inside the theatre, some of us was looking at the screen. As we got there we had to go and sit where the other point England people were sitting. When we sat down, everyone was excited to see all of the Manaiakalani Film Festival entries. Then the lights turned off and the Movie was about to start.

My favorite Movie from the Film Festival was the test. The Movie was about when they had Maths test and when they try to do silly faces while they are testing. They had good camera shots from one person to another around the classroom. People thought it was funny and creative. They had to take 38 scenes and then it involved into a Movie and then put it into the entry in the Manaiakalani Film Festival. The thing I enjoyed about the movie was when Mr barks looked who was being silly, he already knew and then told the boys to stop being silly.

When the Movie finished,we all have to move out quickly as we can because we got to catch the bus to go straight to school. Well Tamaki College had to stay there and watch some Movies. As we got out of the building we went inside the bus and then came back to school.  When we were at school,  we all we got our net-books and put it in our bags and then we went home. By the time we got to school that was the time we had to come school on time.  The time we left to go to Sylvia park was one fifteen. The time we came to school was half past three.

My Favourite Toy Story

When It was time for my favourite show Spongebob Squarepants, I got when Spongebob Squarepants was cooking in the kitchen. After he cooked a burger and done the drink he gave it to the person that order it. When I walked Spongebob to take the food to Matt, he said thank you. As he walked back to the kitchen he didn’t knew that there was water on the ground. It was actually tripping from the roof. it looked like the whole roof was going to come out.  

When he was coming back to go to the kitchen he actually slipped and hit his head. Mr Krabs said are you okay? Spongebob said I feel dizzy. Mr krabs was trying to look everywhere to find where did the water came from. Then he looked up the roof and then he saw a hole. It wasn’t that big. So Mr Krabs went back to his office to call the Jack to repair the roof. When he already called he said can you fix the roof because there are water dripping down from the ground. Then Jack said I will come and have a look.

On the next day the Krusty Krabs was open and Jack came and had a look at the roof when he got up his ladder.  Mr Krabs, Mr Krabs. Yes, I’m coming. As soon as he came Jack said to Mr Krabs It is a very small hole but it looks to me that half of the roof is rotten. So you may have to close this down just for a week. Mr Krabs got shocked when Jack said one week. No I can’t do that. Why not, it is only just a hole. So when the Krusty Krab was closed they’ve started to take off the wood and then put a new wood. After they’ve already done the wood. They were finish, but when he stepped on it he fell and broke the wood, landed on the ground.

The Bird View- Pic-Lits

When the sun was setting on a wonderful day, a bird was having a look at the view and the sun set, resting on top of the fence. With leaves down the bottom of the fence. It might be the safest and quietest place he ever had. Might be the bird always come here and watch the sun set. I think the bird’s mind said I love the view and it’s a quiet place. It was the most beautiful view he'd ever seen on that day. But then one day he wasn’t there, looking at the view and as the sun comes down. Everyday he always go there and said oh look at the wonderful view.

On the next day when the bird came to look at the sun set he had to rest on the grass because the fence came off and got replace as a sharp fence. So when any animal try to jump up it actually stabs them. As the bird went home, a man trapped the bird and the bird could not see the view again. When the bird has been in the vet shop for a few days, the cage door was open, so the bird escaped and was free to go home.

It’s been a few years now and he still didn’t come to have a look at the view. But when he was older there family came one day and looked at the view, looked as the sun sets and have a look at the wonderful wavy beach. So some days they always come here and have a look at the beach. When it was there last day looking at the view, they had a picnic at the beach, went for a swim.

Stomach Churning

We came here for our annual holiday. As I got into the car I felt very brave and all the other people felt scared. When the car was going it started to go faster and faster, people was holding very tightly to the handle because there stomach started to rumble.

We curved and curved, then suddenly the car stopped and we were upside down. It was ten seconds and it came down as fast as flash. All of the people’s eyes were fear. When we were going  right underground, I was amazed when I was riding on the rollercoaster, I was holding on the handle tight like I am holding a pole.
All the colour I see was white. Everyone said we are in heaven and then turn into a blue sky. We came out underground and was going up to the sky and we went loop to loop nearly ten times and everyone felt dizzy. When we went straight down it went speed and then done twist and some people said weeeeeeeeeeeee. That person went so crazy.  Then we saw the finish line and he said four more laps left. Ten minutes later.

We all came out with a spiky hair. Everyone’s stomach felt sick and twisted. When we got out of the car, some people started to vomit. I was laughing because I was the only one that didn’t vomit or even had a spiky hair. The only thing I was doing was eating and watching. I feel very brave when I got home and started to have a twisted stomach.   

Adventure Lost In The Jungle

As I walked into the jungle with my big eyes open I heard a furious sound. So I stopped and looked behind me, it was a scary snake. The snake opened it’s mouth out wide and it came fast to eat me and then I jumped into the bushes. When I fell on the bushes I was lying like a statue and the snake went past me and saw a crocodile in the sea. Then I saw a light coming at me and I started to run and when I reached to the sand I waved my hand as hard as I can. "HELP ME” yelled Jack. On the other side the snake went inside the sea to go and eat the crocodile. The boat was coming at me and then suddenly I didn’t see a light, not even a thing.  Then I saw a wavy water coming at me and I ran so fast around the jungle tree. The snake came with a crocodile and started to eat it. “DISGUSTING” said Jack.  Then the snake started to scream and then the birds fly out of the tree. I said to myself it is getting dark, I should stay here for the night in the cold freezing jungle.

The Next Morning I got up and had nothing to eat so I go under sea with my spear and started to look for some fish and after when I finish I cook it and ate it. That is what I ate for  breakfast. So I went around the jungle and started to collect sticks and when I got back where I was, I started to build a boat but it couldn’t work because I don’t know how to build a boat.  So I just build anything and when I finished I had a boat with a stick standing up. I said I don’t think it will work. So when I pushed the boat  I hopped on it and got my sticks and started to paddle. When I looked at the back it was foggy. I didn’t know where to go. A few minutes later I saw land. It will take like about five minutes to reach at that Island. When he got there I said wait a minute this is the jungle. So if this is the jungle, my plan didn’t work. I might of turned around. “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO” said Jack with a grumpy face. He had no plans left but to stay here and wait until someone comes and rescue. It was getting dark and Jack felt bored because he has got nothing to do.

So he kept on walking and he saw a big volcano. It was about to erupt. Then I herad noises and Jack thought it was people so he ran and when he got there, there were houses. Then the people were all started to run away from the volcano and this man went past me and said come with me I will take you to a safe place. There hiding place was under ground and then “BOOM” !!! The volcano erupts and then rocks camed out and destroyed the houses and trees and the lava came slowly and then went past us and stopped next to the sand. So when the volcano was still erupting, then ashes came fast and went out to sea. All the trees was destroyed and houses to. Even the animals was killed. When they opened the door to come out it was clear and the volcano stopped, everyone came out and had a look at their jungle it was like nothing. So now everyone had nothing to eat, to travel. The manager of the jungle said let’s clean up this place.  So all the rubbish had to be chucked into the sea. After they finish they made houses with bamboos and all went to sleep and wait for rescue. We made a house in the sand and waits until help.

Thank You Silas

Dangers Of Smoking

Did you know that smoking is dangerous for you ? Because smoking can make disease and may affect your brain, heart and the lungs. Then the disease goes around the whole body . 4.9 Million people die from smoking every year. Cigarette is the same word as Smoking.

Nearly 3,000 children started smoking their first cigarette. Some children around the world smoked first . Some children start smoking at the age of 16 years old. Some Adults started smoking when they were are teenager.

Nearly heaps of death are caused by tobacco each year. Smoking can sometimes cause Lung cancer because from smoking and damage the airway and the alveoli. A cigarette is made out of tobacco.

I have shown that smoking is dangerous for you. You can get lung cancer and it gives you disease and affects your body, we don’t want th

at happening here because smoking is not our future.

ART ALIVE

This Term we are learning about ART ALIVE. In Art Alive we can paint and make it look like it was painted by a famous artist. We are looking at artist people around the world. Picasso, Matisse, Monet, Van Gogh and a New Zealand artist, Danielle Hulme. The First artist I learnt about was Vincent Van Gogh. I learn his name because when we were in room 22 and we had to paint the sunflower. He painted it the twelve sunflowers in August 1888, Neue Pinakothek, Munich.  Vincent Van Gogh sold one painting for $148 Million. He cut his own ear to give it to his wife and she did not like it, so Vincent had a very sore ear.

Duffy Theater

We were watching a performance about The Best Book In The World that takes us to amazing adventures like going to space, sailing , workshop, the library and the bookshop. It was going to be a funny and true story, I think?
It was the most coolest performance I ever seen.  My favorite characters were all of them! I was laughing out loud and I thought it was like my favorite funny show Laughing Samoans.  After their performance they were singing 'I'm a Duffy Kid'.
They use to come like two years ago and now they came back and performed again.That was the greatest performance I've ever seen.

Cyber Smart

Footprint is when you go on a website and then when you hop of and someone comes on where you went and the person that was on that page they left there footprint.  The other thing about footprint is when you walk on sand and then they left there footprint on the sand and there was heaps of footprint. There is all different things about footprint. It's pretty when you go on a website and Leave a Footprint.

Netball

I was fast as a cheetah . I was as short as a monkey. There was a lady that was going to teach us how to play netball. Liz  is the coach she tells us Instruction about netball. We Learn how to do pass the Ball, how to shoot and she gave us some time to warm up. So we can ready to play the game of Netball. We had to pass on our chest. Then throw the ball to your partner. 


I had so much fun with my friends playing netball.  Some people in our classroom were bored and some people had excitement. It was cool playing netball. We are playing netball four only four weeks and then no more netball. When I was playing netball I scored some goal for our team. I keep on missing goals like five times.

Back To School

It was a great start of 2012, ready to go back to school and Learning so we can get experiences. I come back to school with my friends, but it's boring my friends go to diffident classrooms but I still got my best friend. It's Silas.  It's great to be back at school.  I can play with my friends like Touch. I like to be back at school because I get to meet my new Teacher . It was Mr Harris that was my new Teacher. I really like him as a Teacher because I play for soccer and he use to be my coach Last Year. I play for the Over 10's for his Team.

Space Presentation

Staying at School Presentation

Tallest Tower

On the first day of term 2 we had the opportunity to make a tower. Our teacher said It is a challenge, see who have the tallest tower in the class. So we have 10 papers and a meter of a tape and a scissors, glue. We worked really hard and try-ed our best to make our tower the tallest tower. We try to make our tower stand but It didn’t work and we try heaps of times.

I worked as a group. My group was William, Roman, Me. We build. We used a tape and scissors, glue, 10 papers. We worked as a group to try and make the tallest tower. We build the tower on Thursday. We build It our class In room 16. We built the tower with scissors and a meter of tape,glue. The tower was made William, Roman and me.

Dinosaurs Story

My dinosaur's name Is Ultimate Master Max dinosaur. Along time ago there was a humongous dinosaur that lives in a jungle. My dinosaur has really sharp claws and teeth, the dinosaur Is really strong and dangerous. My dinosaur likes to eat planets, leaves and grass. My dinosaur likes to eat heaps of meat. My dinosaur likes to drink water to get tall and heathly. My dinosaur is really good and doesn't like bad dinosaur’s. The dinosaur is really tall and it likes to sing, it likes to do some funny dance moves and do silly faces. It’s really funny when my dinosaur does silly faces. Now It’s back to my dangerous dinosaurs. My dinosaur is really really really vexed. My dinosaurs is really fast and it is really scary I think.

My dinosaur had sisters and 4 brothers. My dinosaur likes playing with his brothers and sisters. It’s really fun when he plays with his brothers and his sisters. My dinosaur likes to hunt for food in the middle of the night and in the morning to have breakfast plus in the afternoon to have lunch time to. He likes to hunt for food. Make sure you don’t go to the jungle or else my dinosaur will chase you all day and you will be tired. My dinosaur had heaps of friends he plays jokes with his friends and his friends laugh every time. The mum tells my dinosaur to come inside for dinner time. I say to my friend bye, I’ll see you tomorrow.